I've always liked the view from my mother-in-law's house at night,
Oil rigs off Long Beach
Like floating lanterns out in the smog-dark Pacific,
Stars in the eucalyptus,
Lights of airplanes arriving from Asia, and town lights
Littered like broken glass around the bay and back up the hill.
This is a verse poem about the author's view from the destination of his mother-in-law's house. It is a simple poem, which leaves a strong impact on the reader because it's easy to visualize the scenery he is describing. Some poetic devices used are similes. In line 3, he states that the oil rigs are like floating lanterns. In line 6, he says the town lights are littered like broken glass around the bay. In this poem, the author only describes objects which are "lights". This creates a peaceful, happy mood, accentuated by the thought of tiny lights, lanterns, stars, or shimmering broken glass illuminating your surroundings.
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Wow steph this is a really great poem. It creates such a vivid picture of the scene in my head, and it has a magical feel about it that makes it really enjoyable to read. Great job!
ReplyDeletelike farah said, the imagery is so well done and strong, that it forms a magical scenery in your mind. I really like how much feeling is portrayed through these descriptive words
ReplyDeletegood poem choice!